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Crafting compelling stories: Common pitfalls to avoid as a fiction writer

2 October, 2020 by PashaO
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As a fiction writer, crafting a compelling story sets you apart from other writers. We all want to write stories that captivate our readers, transport them into another world, and leave them wanting more. 

Crafting a compelling story requires more than just putting words on paper. It requires a deep understanding of plot, character, and pacing. A well-crafted story can make readers feel emotions and leave them with a sense of satisfaction at the end. However, there are some common mistakes that writers make that can derail their efforts. In this article, I will discuss some of the most common mistakes writers make and how to avoid them.

Common grammatical mistakes to avoid

As writers, we strive to create stories that are grammatically correct, but mistakes can creep in. Common grammatical errors include using the wrong word or tense, misusing apostrophes, and using incorrect subject-verb agreement. These mistakes can distract the reader from the story and undermine the writer’s credibility. It is essential to proofread your work and have others review it to catch these errors.




Balancing scene description – don’t over or under describe

Scene description is an essential part of writing an engaging story. However, it is important to strike a balance between too much and too little description. Over-describing can bog down the story and bore the reader while under-describing can leave the reader feeling lost and disconnected from the story. Finding the right balance and using description to enhance the story, not detract from it, is important.

Avoiding unanswered questions

Unanswered questions can leave the reader feeling frustrated and disconnected from the story. It is essential to tie up loose ends and answer any questions that arise throughout the story. If there are questions that cannot be answered, it is necessary to address them and provide closure for the reader.

Ensuring all plot threads have a purpose

Every plot thread in a story should have a purpose. If a plot thread doesn’t tie into the overall story, it can leave the reader feeling confused and disconnected. Ensuring that all plot threads have a purpose and contribute to the story is vital.




Character development – avoid cliches and stereotypes

Character development is an essential part of crafting a compelling story. However, it is important to avoid cliches and stereotypes when creating characters. Characters should be unique, with their personalities and motivations driving the story forward. Avoiding cliches and stereotypes can make characters more relatable and engaging for the reader.

Story pacing – avoiding slow starts and rushed endings

Story pacing is crucial to keeping the reader engaged. A slow start can bore the reader, while a rushed ending (Game of Thrones comes to mind) can leave the reader feeling unsatisfied. Finding the right pace for the story and ensuring it builds toward a satisfying conclusion is essential.

Importance of editing and revising

Editing and revising are essential parts of writing a good story. Reviewing your work for grammatical errors, inconsistencies in plot and character, and pacing issues is important. Having others check your work can also provide valuable feedback and help you identify areas for improvement.

Resources for improving writing skills

Improving writing skills is an ongoing process. There are many resources available for writers to help improve their craft, including books on writing, online courses, and writing groups. It is important to constantly work on improving your writing skills to continue crafting compelling stories.

Conclusion

Writing an engaging narrative requires more than just putting words on paper. It requires a deep understanding of plot, character, and pacing and avoiding common pitfalls. By avoiding common grammatical mistakes, balancing scene description, ensuring all plot threads have a purpose, avoiding cliches and stereotypes in character development, finding the right story pacing, and editing and revising your work, you can craft a compelling story that captivates your readers. Remember to constantly work on improving your writing skills to continue crafting stories that transport your readers into another world.

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